by tnguyen25
11 chapters so far, and yet no other man has "hit" on the sexy-looking Thuy? Story needs to be re-directed around the wife. This story becomes more interesting immediately if another man arouses sexual feelings and guilt in Thuy. Unplanned and unprotected sex and fear of pregnancy would ratchet up some excitement! Does the hubby discover the relationship, and how does he find out about it? There could be another party and some video that inadvertently shows someone coming onto Thuy. There are many possible developments that would help this story. The existing plot is running out of gas.