All Comments on 'Vikki's Missing Memory'

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Braincrash almost 2 years ago

4/5. Great story. Well written. Personally, I would have like it even more if the hypnotherapist messed more with her memories and in more detailed ways. Maybe in a part 2 ? It would make sense to deepen the amnesia so she never regain her memories.

Harpy18 almost 2 years agoAuthor

That's definitely a possibility. I don't get to writing much on here as I focus a lot on my longer works for publishing, but when I need a palate cleanser I'm sure I'll get back to it.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great stuff....hope there is more coming. This author is very good

Riboflavin almost 2 years ago

part 2 plz

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