All Comments on 'Virginia Beach Pt. 03'

I Knew It! I just knew mom and dad were swingers! And I suspected Gram too, lol

Great trilogy Erin, except for the repeat stuff in chapter 2 and the name/location thing. I am pretty good at geography, and I know the keys aee nowhere near Va.

But still a good read, thanks ;->

Outstanding story. I cannot believe there aren't more encouraging comments. Please keep writing. I look forward to reading your joint writing with Quinn.

Regards,

G

I loved this story. Her discovery of her sexuality while dealing with the confusion of budding adulthood and a confining family dynamic added a sense of realism. Your talent is obvious and well worth five stars. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

Very nice, well written; I really wish there were more scoring stars, for me 5 is perfection and not really attainable. (Minor point; I wonder how many 1 and 2 stars are awarded.) I notice you haven't posted anything here for quite a while; I hope you are doing well and still writing, you do have talent.