by Steifer_Junge
Tou are eaking this out far too long.
Just do a proper story-length instead of the few words in each part.
What ever it is, has to be better than this. This doctor visit is pretty crappy. Doctors don't do patient test fucking like this and would never stop right in the middle of data collection if they did. This is too dull to enjoy.
Obviously this is fantasy, but a fun fantasy. I find single pages to be a great tease and am wondering what happens next. Maybe you can site the names machine and gel in the next chapter? I am sure I am not the only one interested in possibilities for extending the pleasure.
I likes it very much, especially his becoming more agressive and dominant in the end. I 'd love to read more.. 😘