All Comments on 'Visiting a new doctor Pt. 03'

by Steifer_Junge

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Get on with it.

Tou are eaking this out far too long.

Just do a proper story-length instead of the few words in each part.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Write what you know

What ever it is, has to be better than this. This doctor visit is pretty crappy. Doctors don't do patient test fucking like this and would never stop right in the middle of data collection if they did. This is too dull to enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fun Story

Obviously this is fantasy, but a fun fantasy. I find single pages to be a great tease and am wondering what happens next. Maybe you can site the names machine and gel in the next chapter? I am sure I am not the only one interested in possibilities for extending the pleasure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
love it!

I likes it very much, especially his becoming more agressive and dominant in the end. I 'd love to read more.. 😘

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