All Comments on 'Waiting Tables'

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DquiotiDquioti8 months ago

OK story, well written and descriptive but totally lacking in any eroticism.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy8 months ago

Generous tipper!

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Had potential, but way too rushed. A little character development would have been nice too.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

"College girl has business man parton who is very generous."

PROOF READ - including the Clickbait!

PATRON!

DINGDONG33DINGDONG338 months ago

Good left a lot to be discovered not a lot of story.

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Sensual, long term sexually active male, now retired. Nice enough looking, handle myself well and attractive to women.