All Comments on 'Waking Her Submission Pt. 04'

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Babygirl2985Babygirl2985almost 9 years ago
Brilliant

I love this story. I can't get enough of it, no matter how much I read it. Hopefully, the same privilege will be bestowed on me for part 5. Hurry and write it. I want to know what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sorry, gave it a 1*

I loved your story and was going to give it a 5* score, until....she is left tied up and he goes off to bed, NO NO NO PLEASE! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT IN A BDSM STORY? There are plenty of 'practitioners' who would have him 'blacklisted' if they found out about that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Sadistic bastard, knife bullshit, left tied up.

Three strikes for him. I'm out of here.

Next time leave useless crap like blonde off the tags and add knife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I fully Enjoyed all parts, the first two seemed a Tad rushed, all the details being hurried along for the "good" stuff that ended too quickly.

3&4 very Well written and one of the few stories on this site I've read start to finish. I'll be looking forward to more parts. (:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fucked up ending.

Was good, even great in parts till he turned out to be a pycho.

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