All Comments on 'Waking Up'

A few minor typos- sorry. Fixed version will take a few days to be published. Em

So, after reading that rather self-indulgent piece, I’m not quite clear. Do you like him or not? A

As usual, your writing is exhilarating. Your descriptive talent, along with your sexual expertise, is unmatched. We can only dream and envy your partner.

@Will527 - thanks for the lovely feedback. I’m a very lucky girl too. Em

@PrettyAmelia - I guess I should have written more clearly, a thousand apologies. Guess who’s in the story I have just started? Clue, it features a strap-on. Em

Good stuff!

@Ramrod09 - thanks, hun 💋. Em

@prettyAmelia seems rather sensitive for a domme. The story was very well written and the first of yours I’ve read that captured more than just the physical aspects of intimacy. It suits you rather well.

@jacklyons1967 - “rather sensitive for a domme” oh that is so precious and so funny and so accurate. I haven’t laughed so much on here in ages. Most of my stories were written before I had ever been in love, so maybe the non-physical stuff is not so surprising 😊. Em

This is a new favorite.

You can feel the love for him. Also the pure love you have for the blow job and aftermath.

Or maybe we talk too much and I know you now. LOL

Anyway, great story. Love the payoffs!

Did he give you a nice big kiss after swallowing?

@ctarrantella - thanks, hun. Intentionally a different gear for me. Not sure it was a universally popular move on my part, but I wanted to write something to mark the occasion. Of course we kissed 😊. Em

You mentioned on AH this had dipped below 4. Way better than the score suggests.

@Anon from AH 👋👋👋 - thanks for saying. It’s a bit self-indulgent I guess. I wanted to write something to mark the big life occasion. But I’m not entirely sure why it gets such low marks. I have written worse stories for certian. Maybe it’s the category. Em

This is a short story but it reads long. If you're going to give us one page, make it intense. Rush us. Give us an immediate need to grab onto our cocks and bust that nut, or a ride a vibrator till we cream. You're not getting a lower score for the quality of your work. You're getting it because it's just something to read, not get off to, and most people come to literotica to get off.

@Anon #2 - why so shy? But thank you for the feedback. Em

It was a nice story about two young lovers doing what young lover. I too are from NJ I also found it interesting that you have: an 8 part series with only seven parts. I picked the last one because I wanted to reminisce about fucking Jersey Girls. : )

@Rocketman12 - I’m from Pennsylvania, just an adopted Jersey Girl. Draft stories are counted for dine unfathomable reason. Hence the disconnect. Em

‘‘Em you keep a close eye on comes. You replied to me in 9 minutes. I only received a comment about a post once before. Glad to see you’re so invested in your writing.

Nice work. I'm glad I stumbled across your profile. Definitely will check out more when the need arises!

@lucidmez - glad you liked it 😊 Em