by sideshowlepke
The more I read this, the less I like it. In fact, at 3.5 stars, I think people are being pretty generous! Please, anybody out there, please give me a comment, even if it's just to say I'm an asshole and should find a new hobby, I'd really appreciate it!
I see where you were going with this. Nice concept, the author immersing herself into her characters' world. I think it could work - give it another try.