All Comments on 'Walking in the Rain Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
enjoyable, but needs polish

The writing is arousing and enjoyable, but would be improved with some polish, for punctuation and sentence structure. Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Yes you damn well should continue

What kind of question was that?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
please continue. Great story needs agood end

this story could go somewhere nice

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