All Comments on 'Wanna Fuck My Tits?'

Good premise.

But story -- although there's sex -- isn't really erotic.

Stuff just happens. And there's dialog. But there's real description of her breasts -- except for them being big.

And there's no real description of how her tits felt to him, or to her while he was fucking them.

And there's playing with them for a while before the tit fuckinng began. No touching. No kissing. No licking. No sucking.

And there's no dialog about whether he liked her tits. No discussion about whether he was close to cumming.

Disappointing.

Three stars.

WHEN the male is still unsure, he says to her, "If you show me OUR tits...".

Your story took a big jump there beyond believable.