All Comments on 'Warm Pussies on Ice'

Intensely erotic within an unusual setting — ice fishing shanty, almost quirky which added to the sex which is well crafted — nice blend of dialogue and crisp descriptions. Liked her humorous reflection at the beginning as well as the voyeuristic element — Lydia is great character, got to love her love of sex. Nice first piece. Hope you continue with a longer piece that allows you to develop your characters in more detail — not a complaint; this piece is a 5.

slid first effort.. you already do great with exposition... adjectives and drawing out the action. Keep Writing, and ignore the haters... some people get their kicks being anonymous A$$#0!3$

looking forward to what you bring next!

RA

After finishing the story I must say ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 5 stars for first piece… the other comments are so to the point… u have a great vision, develop the characters a little more before jumping into the ❤️‍🔥💗❤️‍🔥 Love the voyage but a 🐟 shanty…??? OKOK I get it.. kind of cool but a FISH shanty 🤔😊🤔 Again, great start and a 3/4 rise… look forward to the next adventure… if the girls are that hot… for my input… add 🦶 Love those pretty toes 😊 BBB