All Comments on 'Warped Mind Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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I enjoyed this story but felt a lot more could have happened....so much to work with.

I enjoyed reading all of it...thanks Bunky

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved the story

A friend of mine confided that he married, and truly loves intensely, an asexual woman. They have been married for many years, It is incredibly difficult on him sexually but everything else is OK. I would love to read a story by you about a situation like this where he uses mind control on her to accept the fact that she is an asexual so he can bring dates home, eventually having his date try to cuddle up to the wife. Eventually, the wife warms up to both hubby and the women and all live happily ever after.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice finish

I enjoyed many chapters but after a while it got a little boring. That being said I liked what you did with this final chapter.

If you continue you may want to add more characters and give them more challenges to over come.

Good series.

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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