by Louiseawakes
I really like your writing. There's something earthy about it. It seems real, there's lust, honesty and the stories ooze desire and sexuality.
They were all thoroughly enjoyable, thank you
Please keep writing.
Louise, your writing is just so so good. This is a great next chapter in your erotic odyssey. I loved the way this story unfolded and I love the way you hold the reader on the edge :) Excited to say the least to get to the next instalment.
I’m captivated by your storytelling but the plot is not to my liking. You/louise has fucked her son’s best friend and now his girlfriend - what sort of mother betrays the son she says she loves and adores like that?!
I know Lit is a place for sexual fantasies but this is a bit too far for me. Still, the story is well told
Ha ha, no! Find a decent woman!
This is great writing and I love the window into Louise’s conflicted but slutty thoughts. I am sticking to reading the (mostly) lesbian episodes. In a future series I hope you will try just pure lesbian.