All Comments on 'Watching Laurie'

I love it. Keep up the excellent work. Very hot!

Hi, This is a great story! Good as it gets in my opinion, but..... As much as I enjoyed this, and having done loads of report-writing and proofing, my mind catches on the little glitches of tense and other tiny errors throughout. Again, please know I totally enjoyed your story. Several spots, too, where maybe a soundex tool was used perhaps and a word was misspelled or the wrong word used, which had similar sound, but different meaning. At another place, the pronoun 'her' was used three times in succession in the same sentence. Just small things, but little stuff like that can take the edge off, so maybe a final, slow proofing could put a fine finish on a well done piece of work.