All Comments on 'Way Back Very Early'

by Mr56543434

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OOAAOOAA2 months ago

Really bad story...

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Stupid.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodle2 months ago

Don’t write any more stories. You suck at it.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

WTF⁉️

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Rode instead of road. It is not clear why he let his wife become a whore or what was he doing while on the road. Why did Malcom give her up? A lot of questions that could have been answered.

neilnblowme2neilnblowme22 months ago

fuck i just threw up and filled a bucket with vomit

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

What a load of C--P

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

You would have to be mentally ill to put something like this together! -1

PS: You may think that this is just somebody with bad opinion, but 248 stories and not a single RED H...

I rest my case!

myky40myky402 months ago

🤣🤣ridiculous.

Buster2UBuster2U2 months ago

10 Big Blazing Stars for the writer, Mr 56543434 has done it again, Another Hot Hot Hot Story of wife sharing. I Love your work, Sir! I have had several professional whores for GFs and I know that they are the very best at making love, that can be. They have fucked everyone, and I was never Jealous because at the end of the day they came home to me, cuddled up, and gave me the best loving of my life. Their affection was pure and wholesome, their love was intense. I regret loosing them all, but it was wonderful while it lasted. Buster2U

goodshoes2goodshoes22 months ago

A sick story. Do the minds of this author and others like him/her reflect their personal life? Is this how they live?

JH4FunJH4Fun2 months ago
Good Read ⭐⭐⭐

Well as usual your tale creates controversy. I am LOL at the comments and thinking to myself that it was a good read. As such I gave it a Good Read ⭐⭐⭐ rating.

What I am LOL at are those comments that hate it and call it a piece of crap. The reason I am doing that is because all over the world men are sharing wives and women are sharing husbands without any real issues. Somehow, we can get wrapped around the axle over 2 people being friends and do the same thing with just the idea of her making some money doing it. In some nations that isn’t even against the law. That is true in some states in the US.

While I was lol about this tale, I read Buster2U’s comment. I have to say that as a sailor in Norfolk, Va, I meet a few ladies of the evening. While I never paid directly for their services, I did enjoy being with them and introducing them to some of my friends. A few of them married my friends and we have been friends ever since (that has been over 40 years). Do they still offer services for a fee? I don’t know that is between them and their spouse. I just know they have good lives and are happy. While I look at this as a tale that someone created not a true-life adventure, who knows it could be.

Thanks for creating it and giving us another good one. Sometimes a little excitement is good for the soul. Chuckling as I finish.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

That is plain worthless crap you one fucked up individual

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Stupid story!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

What sort of emotions were you searching for? I never saw any reason to care about any of the losers, and that is all this story had.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

STUPID

lujon2019lujon20192 months ago

cucks get on star

you deliberately refuse to use tags to sucker people into reading you cuck stories so now I am opening every story you ever wrote and giving all of them one star

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

one of the worst ever published.

IrishLaddy59IrishLaddy592 months ago

Zero maturity is shown by all characters. No socially redeemable people here at all.

16GaDouble16GaDouble2 months ago

This may very well be the worst bunch of horsefeathers I've ever read, on ANY site!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

isn't it funny how every guy that gets cheated on either has a friend in the security?PI business or is some kind of tech wizard himself? Its such a lame crutch to use.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

please use story tags. I could have saved myself some time by not reading this mess.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Malcom gave her back because she was infected with HIV and she had a couple other STI’s and treatment cuts into a pimps profit. Plus infecting and killing all his customers is bad business. Plus she was all used up and the Johns were taking to long with her because she was so stretched out. But good for the husband taking her back. A real man.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

They just don’t get it, do they. You need an editor, but your story is at least different, and some guys are just not capable of love except for themselves.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Have to agree with 16GaDouble

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I swing back to this author every now and again just to see if there is any improvement, and after 248 submissions the answers still a resounding no.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

The only character with any redeeming qualities in the story is Jess.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Myslałem , że większego g... nie można napisać. Ktos ma nie małe ale bardzo duzę zaburzenie. Co za smiec głowny bohater i żona dziwka

26thNC26thNC2 months ago

Assclown with another big black chimp cuck tale for his nephew Busted. 1 tiny sputtering star for this POS.

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