by Gamblnluck
Good story. Several problems with editing. The family is a little dysfunctional but isn't that what kink is all about. Looking forward to the next chapter.
nothing good can come from this situation for dave.
he needs to turn the tables on that little bitch or get rid of that family.
I'm intrigued. I appreciate you not describing the spankings. I find that beatings leaving welts, bruises and blood are disgusting. I know there are people out there that are into this fetish though. Thank you for verifying that Julie will not cheat. But is that the same as being faithful? And if Dave takes Abby's virginity, he is committing adultery. Anyway I'm ready for chapter 3.
Dave and Julie are in for some rough going from here on out. Just wondering how far Dave is going to go along with this before he blows up. Fantasy story for sure and love the writing style. I think that there was one time when Julie's and Abby's names were switched. Julie will probably be told to take a few lovers just to piss off Dave but Dave will not have any choice. Dave will probably be put on a cock cage with shock and GPS. Work will still get done but Abby will decide when Julie or Dave get out of their chastity belts. Wonder how much more fun Abby is going to have with these two.
I'm telling you Dave needs to beat Abby's ass to get mind Straightened back out, she so full of that FLR crap, thinking she can grown men or women what to do or death their asses, she going to get really hurt in the future. Then Dave needsto call grandma and tell to take this FLM shit and Shove it up her ass, what's going do??