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by TroutKilgore

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lc69hunterlc69hunter2 months ago

very good start

BiggamusBoyRexBiggamusBoyRex2 months ago

Looking forward to a lot more.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Fine premise.

But all sexual contact is rushed.

Needed to be described in much greater detail, with dialog about what was happening and how it felt.

And there needed to be input from each girl as she was 'watching' the other get rubbed.

Three stars.

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Hetero male happily married to a girl that is most guy's fantasy. My writings are either events we've enjoyed or are intentionally written for us to act out.