All Comments on 'Welcome Home Ch. 02'

Should've posted this under non-erotic. LW are already flooded with stories unrelated to the category.

So this chapter is just to confirm that chapter 1 is a shameless plug to other stories? OK. Where is this series going?

As of this writing, the Wifey's smug redirection in Ch 2 is running a full point lower than 'scatterbrain' husband's Ch 1.

I can appreciate a woman's telling her husband to go find himself and their reconciling 10 years later. I cannot, however, appreciate that she still treats him like a child.

Her low scores are well-deserved.

That’s new. An advertisement / apology in place of a story. Should be in Non-erotic category.

Is there a category for mentally ill or drug addicted authors? Should be based on some of the stories on Lit.

I must say I enjoyed this flash story explanation. I have not seen your stories because there are a few categories I don't read. You seemed to write your stories for those.

You have the knack for telling a great story though. I loved the way you presented this one. gave you 5 stars.

This is one of the toughest categories to get a good rating. I don't follow authors. I look for story lines that seem interesting.

Gamblnluck

Dumb, who wants to read a tongue in cheek ad for your other lame stories.

Hellaciously creative!!! Loved it!! 5/5!!!

Is there a story in there somewhere? Creative but aimless. Why separated for 10 years to start with.....

Well I guess this is a LW story in the strictest sense, but the author is definitely not loving. She is a mean spirited, insulting shrew. Without any sexual situations, this story attempt is just plain boring.

Absolutely hilarious. No idea how I clicked on this, but I enjoyed the outrage of the humorless commenters as much as the tongue-in-cheek self-promotion of the author. I'm going to read some of his other stuff

Great transition piece

Is there a theme to your writing. I read 2 stories so far and they're confusing... Not bad or good just...