All Comments on 'Wendigo Wind'

I don't know if it is a good one but it is a horror story so well done with that. You need to be careful not to use the same word many times in the same paragraph. Do a search with "Davis" and you can find that you use the name five times just in a small paragraph. That's to be expected in a first draft but not in the text that you submit. You finish the story with what happens to Davis and something about his wife. Who cares? Lessa is the protagonist.

I believe some editing could be in order.

Well I told Linette's story and her leaving the Wendigo... she got the fairy tale happily ever after...Happily ever after and hope are important themes....

Feels rushed. Story line is jacked up. You skip all over the place then she goes from being stuck for 200 years to married????? Huh??? It also lacked any mystery, no sexy intimacy. For instance if it was one particular Wendigi obsessed with her not hundreds of spirits. Idk poorly written to me. No need to rush so you can publish if it's bad