All Comments on 'What a Deal! Ch. 31'

by deadeye_76

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Whackdoodle 3 months ago

If you need to have a biography of everyone in the story, you have too many people.

Second, sometimes, people are tired, mentally and physically exhausted and the last thing they want is to have sex. You portraying everyone as DTF 24/7 is cliche and boring.

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