All Comments on 'What I Learned in College Ch. 01.1'

Five.

The Best times are ....1) unplanned

2) and all bout the sex ...

I want to thank every for their comments and I am going to edit my use of quotations marks in future chapters.

I also hope to eliminate "sphelling airs" 2.

Wish me luck!

I'm not sure if you know, but you also forget to put words in places where words should be you even did it in your comment lol, filling in the blanks makes it like jbgjhrbg you know? o.o but i do it to when i write, as i write im saying it in my head so not all the words get put on paper but i know what i wrote so i understand it because i can fill the blank immediately

but yeah it was good

All the critique is valid!

Next time I think about working on stories when I am at home and on cold/allergy medicine, it might be better if I don't...:)