All Comments on 'What I Need to Happen'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Nice start!!!!!!! LOVE slap hapy papy #9

russeltrustrusseltrustabout 2 years ago

Delicious, the narrator is so unaware of herself and her pain's real causes, that the reader knows it's going to be a married man with children, but the author lets the audience watch the narrator walk back into this trap of her own making. lovely and effective craftsmanship.

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I'm using this as an outlet for my inner most fantasies and to log some of the fantasies that I've actually got to participate in.