All Comments on 'What Just Happened? Ch. 03'

Personally I never found issue with a more implied sense of control, but this story is delving deeper into the more impactful implications of such a power; how it works, what the limits are, and how the character deals with it on an emotional and personal level.

This story is coming out at the same time as Lightning Struck, which is decidedly *not* dealing with those concerns. I know I much prefer this sort of story, but it will be interesting to see who "wins" in the court of public opinion.

This is a very enjoyable tale.

Yes, I did add a callout to a commenter. I think it's important to take readers seriously, and though I'm writing this as a bit of personal fun, I've got no problem addressing the desires of readers. Chapter 4 coming soon! I'm enjoying the "lightning strikes" series myself. It's cool to see different takes on the mind control theme. :-)