All Comments on 'What Just Happened? Ch. 06'

Story progressing well - would like to see deeper plot develop rather than one sexual escapade to another... Still 5*

I hope this has some bi vibes, with Tom and Eds bare asses nearly touching and the focus on Tom's dick. Fun story even if it stays straight!

not my type. I am DOM. Not sharing person. Would be better if he took girls.

The man is 26 and acts like he's 12. How about letting him act a little more mature?

Thanks for your comments. I write short stories featuring the sort of sexual situations I enjoy reading about. This is a porn story site after all, not a literary journal. Thus I don't worry overly much about character development or realism. :-)