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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I've loved the series till now. It's well written, flows well and as believable as mind control can be.

But, this chapter just felt a little too gratuitous. I mean it's great that, Ed doesn't have any hang-ups, but this family gathering seemed forced, even if the sex was hot. Maybe it's just me.

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