by Edward1970
There are lots more situations for him to take advantage of, other family members, a new boss, high school crush, mature women, co-eds, his pastors wife and daughter...
Thanks for the encouragement, and I agree. For instance, I've been thinking about Ed getting back at his ex from the beginning, though I may take a short break from this story line.
Loved the story!
Just wanted to say you've already figured out how to monetize his talent. Have him contract out to companies as a moral officer. Happy employees are profitable employees.
I’d say if you need a break from the story, maybe tie off this arc and come back whenever you’re ready . Far better than leaving the story hanging imo.
Like the pace so far.