All Comments on 'What Just Happened? Ch. 08'

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devildog0302devildog0302over 3 years ago
Keep going

There are lots more situations for him to take advantage of, other family members, a new boss, high school crush, mature women, co-eds, his pastors wife and daughter...

Edward1970Edward1970over 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the encouragement, and I agree. For instance, I've been thinking about Ed getting back at his ex from the beginning, though I may take a short break from this story line.

LucivarSDLucivarSDover 3 years ago
Great Story!

Loved the story!

Just wanted to say you've already figured out how to monetize his talent. Have him contract out to companies as a moral officer. Happy employees are profitable employees.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Some kind of conclusion?

I’d say if you need a break from the story, maybe tie off this arc and come back whenever you’re ready . Far better than leaving the story hanging imo.

Like the pace so far.

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