All Comments on 'What Katie Wants'

Enjoyed the story quite a bit. Very detailed and a solid build. Looking forward to seeing more, either a continuation f this story or whatever other story comes out next.

What's new about this? Nothing at all! All old characters, over used lines, long and boring story! And all the signs the boring will have a lot of follow ups! Why someone who writes well has the need to choose to follow overused and stupid plots and not write something new?

The concept that a newlywed wife would go off the rails out of the box is impossible to believe, then the rest is the same as a million other stories in this category.

Great story! We hope there is a part 2:)

Excellent writing style, terrible plot choice. Tired and formulaic, nothing made it stand out from a thousand other stories here. Solid 3 star, with the writers talent it could so easily have been a 5 star.

Excellent build-up to a great climax!

Very good story. I liked Katie's internal feelings about cheating and her guilt for thinking about it.

Looking forward to more interracial stories. Will there be a Paer 2 for this one?

A wonderful story. And so well written. Your ability to capture and articulate the female mind and mannerisms is very special. So many future chapters come to mind. Shaun's destiny as a Fluffer seems sealed. Amy x

Great story. I would to read more chapters to learn what Katie & Daniel got up to during the rest of the honeymoon.

Too bad this new hubby is a drunken fuck tard. Always makes me wonder why women want to marry such losers like this & I see it all the time. If Kate was smart she’d better start realizing this probably isn’t going to get any better. As for the sex & cheating that’s hot. I love slutty cheating wives. The only way this story could’ve been hotter is if she wasn’t on birth control. A huge pregnancy risk with him holding her down & unloading in that pussy would be so hot. Thanks for the story……..solid 5 stars!!!

Really good story and a great job telling it

Chef's kiss!

Absolutely love this story!

Great story. Will there be a sequel?