All Comments on 'What Landlords Deserve Ch. 01'

This is a fantastic start! It's a bit slow, but I don't mind at all. The fact that this main character is an absolute dickhead makes these upcoming chapters especially exciting to see, because he absolutely deserves to get knocked off of his high horse! Since this entire story has been written by the time I read this, I'm just gonna blow through them all!

I'm excited to see how this'll develop!