All Comments on 'What We Say in the Dark Ch. 04'

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Bronco56Bronco56over 1 year ago

Great story. Looking forward to the next part. 5stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

why do you have this series in the wrong catagory? This is either Mind Control or Non-consensual not Erotic Coupling as you have the wife cuckold. Very misleading representation based on catagory.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

really liking this story. Loved the shopping trip, need to see more of Lily giving Cassie things to do to make it harder for Cassie and Damián to get together. I am not sure who I am pulling for here yet. I love that she told friends about what is going on, that give you more roads to go down if you want. Thanks for sharing with us.

Pappasleaze!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Like the turn this story seems to be taking. Hope she sticks with it, but there’s a lot of story left to go.

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...