All Comments on 'What You Wish For Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Epically stupid

Forget going to the airport. Go to the Embassy and the police. All you need is for them to be at the meeting and this whole plan is toast. Forgoing that, show up at the next meeting heavily armed and kill him. Life is cheap. If they take the wife make it your lifes mission to kill all involved. For fiction this was just dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
someone must have shit in your cornflakes, bitch.

Terrible story.Ugly, non erotic, racist, all around dog shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Humiliation

Great story so far that promises so much more.

Have her tattooed extensively and lewdly- deliciously humiliating and permanent!

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