All Comments on 'What's Under My Sundress?'

Que?

Horrible writing style, this POV is horrible!

2nd person stories seem hard to pull off, and did not here. Story is a bit confusing.

Have read all your pieces and never disappointed. Never conventionally erotic and never the same. Well, same in that your writing encourages one to think and enjoy — sometimes poignantly so, sometimes smiling at humor but always fun to read. In this case, one can imagine how she plays out her Me Day, but what made the piece attractive was the sassy teasing/playing and closing.

erotic play

That relationship is already over, they just don't realize it yet. Truly pathetic.

Wrong category. I'd suggest Exhibitionist & Voyeur.

Another slut with no sense or manners. Not really a LW story.

What the hell was this. A totally blank story. Nothing!

2nd person sucks and is an automatic rating of 1.

I disagree with the harsh criticism, I liked it and thought it was fun.

It started out dumb and got worse; couldn't finish it. I hope it was great.

Nice

Disappointed in this one. I love to fantasize women in sundresses. I thought she'd show off her charms but alas, nothing.

2 stars

Non erotic nothing.

Somewhat over the edge, a bit whimsical but still an interesting, distracting story.