All Comments on 'What's Yours is Mine'

by Shabobo

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

There was no real story here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Crappiest load of improbable fiction l have read in a long time.

Bicintennialman11Bicintennialman11about 1 year ago

Great story, love to see where this goes

alchiealchieabout 1 year ago

Great story! Would love to hear more of this. Maybe a sequel.

ShaboboShaboboabout 1 year agoAuthor

I will probably write a short follow up story. This story, more or less, was told to me by an "Anna" and there was indeed a second part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The 1st 2 commenters are obviously very astute in their appraisal of this piece of crap. I really wonder what kind of mental defective or brand of drug the next 3 are abusing. The author should save the effort of continuing to produce nonsensical crap. I could only read the first 3 chapters before skimming, quickly to the dreadful end.

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