All Comments on 'When Bulls Collide (SND)'

what a $hitload of garbage

Why do people like this kind of stuff?

It’s totally garbage in this category you have ruined what could have been a good story but you totally missed the point of category’s . This is now just utter garbage this story could have been massive in the correct category interracial category. But you have still got the wet behind the ears problem like all newbies have . You wrote an interracial story and you put it in the loving wife category why?. The story was plain and clear an interracial sexual encounter aka a white woman having sexual relations with a coloured man. How plainly can it be you completely ignored the massive how do I put this elephant in the room scenario . You show great talent as a writer but you are clearly not going to get anywhere if you don’t check your work. All this has done is made you look like a complete idiot/fool for not noticing that your story was interracial category. This category the loving wife category only loves BTB stories ( Burn The Bastard/Bitch ) . Man I so wanted to say great story but I can’t sorry

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LOL! It would have NEVER happened like that. She'd be in jail. Even for fiction this was ridiculous.

That ending fucked me up

Why would any husband accept being sexually cutoff from his wife?

There is ZERO goddamn explanation for something as important as that.

Then this ridiculous incarceration. What did he go to jail for? What crime did he commit or at least, Sam lied about and how did it go to trial?

and if you google a Jamaican resort, why would this resort have been at the top of the list without any explanation? And why wouldn’t his wife just divorce him?

Why, exactly, does she hate him so much that she would conspire to send him to prison for a crime he didn’t commit?

I really wish authors, like yourself, would do shots of tequila until the urge to write passes.

You suck and you shouldn’t write a grocery list nevermind erotica.

"Black cock is the best!"

yeah. Right. Okay. LOL

who/why would someone write this and think it was good enough to read??? 1*

What a desciptable story, how can you hâte a man this much ? I wanted to puke over this

You are seriously fucked up. Get help you fucked up freak. And for fucks sake put your bullshit in the fetish category.

I enjoy reading stories with high scores and bad scores,yours earned the score it’s gotten.

I could feel this in my gut

Wrong category, although I understand that Literotica doesn't have a Garbage category...

What a dumb F****r! I for got how many black and white guys that would disappear.

When he was released from prison he he was arrested for the murder of several black men a white man and his wife. He yelled meet your maker you SOB's.

Pure and total crap from a seriously demented mind. Please move any further drivel to the Fetish section if you must write again.

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Was a great story til he was arrested. Oh you have a son now. Bull shit ending

Is there a polite word for s ..t? Writing was good but the story was repulsive.

What a worthless WHORE! I knew a local guy that his wife cheated with a local business man. The business man was a high roller. It seemed that several people couldn't understand where all his money came from. Well it finally came out. He was stopped by the state petrol and they brought the drug sniffing dogs and found that there were drugs in plastic bags inside of the horses that he was hauling. That cleaned him out of money and he had to serve time. What a Winner. The wife that was cheating was questioned but not arrested. She was lucky in that aspect but made her affair public. The husband filed for divorce but dropped the divorce and rebuilt the marriage. When the business man was released he moved away.

When bulls collide they killed each other and Mark left the disrespectful bitch on her own.

More stories like this!!!

Two bulls collide with just one White Knight and then they are hospitalized. Bull's no more they are steers.LOL!

Delusional at best. Stupid really.

It's been a while since I used this old favorite, but this effort definitely deserves its presence:

What the fuck was erotic about this ENTIRE story?

Seriously, way too many people out there need to take care of their mental health. Just sayin'.

Can we get a follow-up

Such haters on here. Love to hear a sequel.

Just plain badly written.

Every time you think you’ve read the silliest, most stereotypical big black clown story in LW, something like this comes along.

How fucked up can a bitch really be

Don't like it

How do police approach a bound man in someone's house, unbind him, then arrest and convict him so that he's in jail for years?

And the cucks reading get excited by it

Got to be the worst ending I've ever read.

Fucking clown

After release from prison. He seriously plots his revenge... Realizing. His now ex-wife also had a hand in his arrest and imprisonment... At first, he had felt so useless he wanted to commit suicide. but then, He felt it would only be to their benefit... And so, in the long run he got back at them....after which, he moved on with his life. Never regretting what he did. BTB