by rpwilbur
loved the whole series. keep it coming, maybe when taylor gets pregnant. by the why taylor swift is the hottest chick ever
Becoming a bit of a critic, ain't I? The idea was right, I will give you points for that. Otherwise this would be a 25 point story. Now, about the actual story, you made it to confusing as Taylor during the sexual scenes. And I agree with my fellow critic in saying 'Who the hell is Robert?' Improve on your work, and you will eventually become a Literotica wiz.
lOVED IT FUCKIN AMAZING PLEASE MAKE MORE MAYBE WITH TAYLOR PREGNANT? ALSO PLEASE WRITE A SERIES BASED AROUND CARRIE UNDERWOOD SHE AND TAYLOR ARE MY FAV COUNTRY STARS
I loved this story. you should keep up the story. Does he end up marrying Taylor. Does he Get Taylor, Lindsey, Carrie, and Kellie pregnant. Does jealousy end up causing problems in the group. Does Taylor end up dominating any one else.
You should keep the story going,but keep it going with the guy as the story teller!!! GREAT SERIES!
Come back to this! Make more, please! This is so good, you could write fucking fifty shades of swift! Hahaha
But really, You've got talent with this shit man.. Good work.