All Comments on 'Where Am I Ch. 01'

Blows RAIN down. Queens and kings REIGN. You control a horse with REINS (and rein in your enthusiasm).

Interesting session, but there's not enough WHY to make it believable. I don't think getting drunk and acting like an ass is grounds enough for his girlfriend to go all de Sade on him.

Not really enjoyable (and if you have problems with LOSE, LOOSE in the next chapter I'm going to scream).

Thank you for your feedback, even though it wasn't very kind, I like to think I learn from it since these are my first submissions.

This story was written from Andrew's point of view. if you read Chapter 2 it is written from Kim's point of view and should give you more insight as to why.

Thanks for taking the time to read my story.

Hard. Ridiculous story.

I loved this. There is nothing so hot as being controlled by a woman. Especially if she smokes cigars.

Just abuse. Nothing erotic, just a sadistic misandrist getting off on causing pain. Think it’s about time he found a new girlfriend.