All Comments on 'Where the Climate's Sultry Pt. 01'

Great start

Great story for a first time! Like the relaxed style and the humour. Keep ‘em coming!

Really cool story. I didn’t have a clue about the poem til I Googled the title. A bit too long for me to read!

Looking forward to the next instalment.

You've set this story up to vex poor Hunter mightily, and I like how you created the predicaments with both Briony on the plane and Julia in the double room. Even how Hayley arranged for them to be there was quite ingenious.

You've established this with the chance to be comical, awkward (in a fun way) and satisfying for Julia and Hunter. Thing is, I'd recommend against making Hunter "well-endowed," as that's a cheap thrill and is something too many authors resort to. Hopefully, he has plenty of other "tools" in his knowledge to please a woman and they have enough charm and wiles to excite him and us. Ultimately, it all depends on you. 4

Don’t listen to the old curmudgeon. Give him a proper John Holmes!

Impressed with the start (if a bit slow). Now suck this guy's cock , and get the ball rolling !

He’s pretty hopeless for a self-made multi-millionaire!

One suggested edit - you use ‘widow’ in a couple of places. I think it should be ‘widower’

LOL!

I can’t seem to edit this, mate, but thanks for the heads up.

Counted at least 4 mistakes, including things that I don't think are words.