All Comments on 'White Teacher Begins His Journey... Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I gave up at the 12-1/2 inch cock. Fantasy I like but not stupid. At least you made the effort.

tchina85tchina85about 2 years ago

Not bad. What turned me off initially was the punctuation usage, or lack thereof. Commas can enhance the vibe of the story, as could a semicolon, in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

waiting for next parts. Hoping coming soon with the two boys being turn out too. Maybe with by more black men.

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