All Comments on 'Wholesome Wife Turned Hot Wife Pt. 02'

Tim has been relegated to a bit player as is always the case with these sort of relationships. Only a matter of time.

I like it

A great part 2 with balancing the needs and desires of the three main characters. Looking forward for part 3 and seeing how the husband "Tim" reacts to his wife and Jake taking the initiative / lead in the developing relationship between the 3 of them. Hopefully Bella and Jake get a date night without Tim that could be interesting too.

As long as you don't marginalize Tim, I will continue to follow and like this series don't make her a cunt

Hot.

Only 4 stars because she went to CVS to get Plan B.

I have given you a 5 on the first two chapters. The next chapter could be 5 or a 1, depending upon the treatment of the husband relationship, as that is what a hot wife relationship is all about

I liked the story and the pacing. Nice description of the thoughts and feelings of Bella. Presumably, can't bear the use of "kitty" and "Baby girl" but that's down to me. The writer should definitely keep it going. Four stars, well done.

Bella needs to realize what a sissy loser wimp she's married to, dump him, clean him out in the divorce and move in with big daddy Jake. Let her limp weak hubby raise the kid, she doesn't need the distraction.

You described a fucking idiot for a husband. Congratulations...... Not...

Hot wife or Cucking wife ? Too many almost identical in this category. Nothing new.

Hotwife is another name for a cheating slut.

of course we want more *S*

You need to finish the night!

First thing I'd like to say is hell yeah I like to see the story to the end and if I may ask please don't make the nice guy finish last every damn time. I mean seriously can't a guy be happy with a man just sharing his wife with him and getting some good pussy and leaving at that versus trying to steal her away from the husband and breaking up the family after all she has a two babies at home been married for how many years Jack needs to step aside he ain't going to keep her anyway she ought to know that and come to her senses his big dicks only new for so long then she's in the same boat she was with the husband new dick is only good for so long before it's not new anymore is what I'm trying to say. PS thanks for writing a a story where the stud is not degrading the husband to no end that gets old it's nice to see a rented stud / boy toy treat the husband with some respect although not much good story keep running please ✌️ PS next time don't leave me hanging will you

nicely written ,,,,,,,

Thank you again for allowing Jake to take his time opening up his new hot wife present slow slow slowly.

I'll reiterate my PT. 01 comment suggesting Jake do so in all manner and ways. Including showing Bella his not so gentlemanly side and occasionally inviting one of his male friends to join in. Eventually Jake will utilize Bella to perform sex acts with strangers for both his ego and to curry favors but that part is a long way off I hope. And little Timmy will love every bit of getting less and less as other get more. Thanks again for best Lit tale in quite a while.

Delicious story 😋. Throbbing with anticipation of the follow up.

more, more, more

I'm sorry to say, this one got off track. Not as good as the first one.

Part 1 was great but this is trending in the wrong direction. Jake, instead of being a nice guy sharing Bella, is turning into a domineering prick, consumed with his own self satisfaction. I hope Bella and Tim get back on track next chapter.

A lost wife.

The writing is sophomoric, ie immature. Its not bad per se, just not all that entertaining.

This is great, love the buildup and her seduction by Jake. Every hotwife needs to experience a confident, experienced, and dominant bull. Made all the difference for our experience!

Wholesome whorewife part 2.

Wow. All the clothes shopping is very erotic. Bella is losing her love for Tim, realizing he wants to display her and have her as a hotwife solely for his own pleasure. As a result, she is becoming more controlling. While she is submissive to Jake, she is becoming more dominant with Tim. He is on his way to becoming a cuckold, whose use will be to pleasure Bella’s pussy when it is filled with another man’s cum. He will comply, as he is getting used to Bella telling him what to do. She is well on her way to becoming Jake’s submissive slut. Will she break out and fuck other men? Jake seems to enjoy bringing the slut out of Bella, but he may not have any other interest in the gorgeous wife and mother of two. The author has developed the story and his characters in a patient, step-by-step manner which is very believable, and very erotic. Love it so far.

Great keep going

Highly erotic. Please continue.

Bring on chapter 3!!!! 5 more stars!!!!

fantastic, thank you!

More please, great story line

Love the story, I’m not sure about Jake, seems to be a bit of a snake. Love the showing off in the bar.

Thanks totally enjoying it.

WOOW talk about coercion

That Jake needs a bit of a kicking

It’s one thing to be a hotwife but something totally different to encourage things behind Tim’s back

Totally unexceptable behaviour

Loving the story, it's the sort of thing I want my wife to do,so exciting watching your wife walk around knowing men want to fuck herbals to walk her back through the hotel with others knowing another man has fucked her, I find that so horny,keep going with the story

Same bland story of a wife finding a bigger dick and moving her interest from husband (and kids) to the temporary cock. The old difference from the other empty stories is the attention to details.