All Comments on 'Whose Fault Was It (Second Half) Ch. 03'

The Judged owned his wife, huh? Guess he really was old fashioned.

He's a lucky boy,many women wouldn't have put up with his behaviour - hopefully he'll have learnt a good lesson this time !

What was the purpose of this "chapter three of the second half"? It accomplished nothing.

Great continuation of the story. More please & would like to hear them discuss what broke them apart.

when is this train wreck of a story going to end? hopefully with this instalment.

And never will be ! 1*.

Now for the finish - IT IS time

ever going to learn why Jeremy has never liked Janet? This story is so good that I can overlook the bad writing skills.

Thanks for the offering.

I realize that it's too late now. But if you ever post again, use an editor.

I mean really. Finish it up! Which of course is a joke since all of this is done and posted. But just to let you and everyone else know, this is dragging...........

Learn the difference between "shuttered" and "shuddered".

Wow, a 9 year time warp is epic. Mark ran for his fucking life from the crazy bitch. And her mother still was keeping her home up? But what I don't get is that once an ex, it's almost always a better idea to stay an ex. The office story was aborted full term. This isn't good, it makes me very unhappy. It really dragged on; I can feel the love of writing to see letters on the screen, but it has to be edited to remove all the junk.

And I started skipping at an exponential pace around the ring buying time. I saw something about marking each other and werewolves came to mind. Then I saw something about her saying he was paying for some flowers. Bzzzzttt. He made a mistake again. Do not like.