by 32aa
I'm not sure cousin on cousin action should count as incest considering 1st cousins may legally marry in 19 states.
Excellent story. Sad ending. I kind of thought they would battle out with the parents.
Truly worthy of 5 stars
Loved it. They shouldn have to separate. Why couldn't she move to LA and they live together? No one there would know she was his cousin.
Wonderful story of love and great lovemaking. They could have stayed together and even married. The family surely would be happy to know she is with someone who will love and cherish her forever. Agree with previous poster you should either rewrite this chapter or write another similar story with a happy ending.
Don’t listen to all the negative comments. Great story with a sad ending. You don’t always get a they lived happily thereafter. Well written.
So we’ll written but please, don’t let it end like that. These two love each other so so much they deserve to be reunited in the deep love they share. Another chapter please?
Ellen’s husband is abusive and she finds refuge in the arms of her beloved cousin…..
Absolutely loved this story. The ending is sad but it seemed fitting. Well done on another awesome read.
"It remained a secret we each took to our grave." Are you telling me this story was written from beyond the grave???
Great story bit of a sad ending would have liked to see them stay together .keep writing you do some brilliant an entertaining work thanks.