by greysequoia
I love your stuff..... it's short but very to the point and so clearly puts the images in my mind. And this is insignificant but I can't remember ANY typos or poorly worded sentences. Wow, I hope you can keep this story coming.
All 5 of Your chapters were wonderful some of the best writing I have read.. I hope You continue to write additional stories with like content...
stephanie
I had to sit here and read them all the way through. what DID happen to the other girls? Why are they showing her the videos? Will she be punished for taking off her blindfold?
I hope your next chapters are as addictive as the last!
I appreciate all the feedback and there are more chapters on the way!
Best so far, excellent. You are creating a lovely sub/pain slut.