All Comments on 'Wife Deals with a Growing Problem'

by littlepinkpeach

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BiggaluteBiggaluteabout 1 year ago

Short and sweet. Good story in 750 words. Hopefully you'll write and post more

KuBal46KuBal46about 1 year ago

As a brave confession of lust, a perfect little story. Congratulations from somebody plagued by verbosity and always excessive length.

sheeversheeverabout 1 year ago

good ! love short and to the point .. if only some of the contributers took a leaf out of your book and edited their stories.. please do another story...

LuckyMMLuckyMMabout 1 year ago

A wonderful short to the point story. I encourage you to write more. Maybe a chapter 2 of the same story? Well done. Let’s see some more. I don’t usually comment, but this time I want to encourage you to develop what you started. Time to take the plunge.

littlepinkpeachlittlepinkpeachabout 1 year agoAuthor

This is my first submission - thank you all for the wonderful words of encouragement!

B3ndoverB3ndoverabout 1 year ago

Sorry but this isn’t even a story

TheOldStudTheOldStudabout 1 year ago

Love your name! Don't pay the naysayers any attention. Please keep writing. This was a nice, compact short story, as per the rules. I cannot imagine trying to write exactly 750 words...

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

To all the commenters below:

Yes, please, keep encouraging this person to write about cheating on one's family.

What a load of crap.

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