by littlepinkpeach
Short and sweet. Good story in 750 words. Hopefully you'll write and post more
As a brave confession of lust, a perfect little story. Congratulations from somebody plagued by verbosity and always excessive length.
good ! love short and to the point .. if only some of the contributers took a leaf out of your book and edited their stories.. please do another story...
A wonderful short to the point story. I encourage you to write more. Maybe a chapter 2 of the same story? Well done. Let’s see some more. I don’t usually comment, but this time I want to encourage you to develop what you started. Time to take the plunge.
This is my first submission - thank you all for the wonderful words of encouragement!
Love your name! Don't pay the naysayers any attention. Please keep writing. This was a nice, compact short story, as per the rules. I cannot imagine trying to write exactly 750 words...
To all the commenters below:
Yes, please, keep encouraging this person to write about cheating on one's family.
What a load of crap.