All Comments on 'Wife Enjoys Topless on the Beach'

Liked it, but unsure as to the switching between their different POV during the story

Good first story. It would help if you had a more definitive separation between the two story tellers. I had a difficult time figuring out who was narrating at times which distracted from the story.

Part 2??

Rule of thumb, disregard anyone who says they gave it one star, insists that you're in the wrong category, has a profile without a single story posted, or outright insults you.

You know what you like, you know why you're here, be you.

Thanks for the story.

Dont know if the story was any good or not because as soon as my head started to throb (no not THAT head, like when a cum guzzling gay cuck sees another mans cum laying there waiting to be slurped up) I stopped reading.

I tried but the writing really made it hard to get through.

Exhibitionist!

4

Good story, and I thought that the change from character to character worked very well.

Good story

The only thing I didn't like was that it ended too soon. Looking forward to Ch. 2.

I didn't have any trouble with who was talking.

Thank you for your story.

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