by up4anything0849
Wrong category: gay male has its own ace.
No hate on the dude; but saying he’s not gay while doing gay shit and getting off to it says he’s gay.
Run buddy, it’s a slippery slope to a really f’d up life. This will not end well
1☆ This is the Loving Wives category not the Fetish or BDSM or Gay or any other... What is the deal Literotica? Time to leave this site altogether? Some of the best stories in Loving Wives do not even have any graphic content. They simply tell a story while building character development to the point readers can identify with them. Hating the evil nere'do well and developing empathy for the hero/heroine. But Literotica seems to be failing to manage their site. Loving Wives has become an amalgamation of Interracial Love, BDSM, Gay, Fetish with a dash of Incest/Taboo to boot! Just not feeling the love here... Come on Literotica, pull your head out of wherever it currently resides. You coddle the misposters and rudely ignore a whole bunch of faithful readers in the process!
I agree with the previous Anon. It's weird how "wide" the parameters of what's accepted in LW have become.
Fetish would be much better for this one.
Did you know theres a gay section here?
You and your stories belong there.
Literally no one wants your idiocy posted here.
You're another loser trying to ruin LW and today marks one of the lowest points its ever had as far as stories go. Congratz you and several other retread authors have made this section virtually unreadable. You cant even write a spank story let alone anything with any value.
Sheeeesh! Get a proofreader. Typos out the ass (pun intended as on 'ass' was written 'add'), and you need to do the entire crash course on "your" and "you're". Decent otherwise. 3/5.
Ruined a great tale with the cuckold shit at the end, as it hasnt happened (and hopefully it doesnt) Loved it so 4 but if u go down that cuck line then it will drop to 1
I thought this was a loving wife trying to spice up their sex between her and husband.
Then page 2 telegraphed that we are in for a cuckold, slut-whore transformation and fetish mode in chapter 2.
If my wife even suggest I get pegged then be my dominatrix, she'll be getting my boot out on the streets.
When husbands give full control to the wife, 90% marriage will go downhill from there.
Hate cuckold/cheating/sluts stories.
Very good story, hubby is going to find out how good it feels to have your ass fucked by a big real cock while his wife supervises and watches, he will become bi sexual and learn to enjoy being the top with women and the bottom with a boyfriend, he may even find himself on his hands and knees, besides his loving wife, being buggered together, ideally wearing matching lingerie ......mmmm.
Unfinished story, you need to at least use Spellcheck, you're in the wrong category and you need a WAY better storyline. This was garbage.