All Comments on 'Wife vs Maid'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantasy I'll share

Good Story..

Albeit maybe not in good taste to say this but your slain leader Mrs. Bhuto who was killed was a desirable woman who I really would have liked to undress, suck on her breasts and pussy for about two or three hours before I made love to and fucked all night. Just a fantasy of mine I thought I'd share with you. A beautiful MILF. Shame some son of a bitch had to end her life.

trogtedtrogtedover 15 years ago
Good story.

Looking forward to seeing subsequent chapters.

You might consider having an editor. Despite writing in a foreign language you did very well.

Liberated

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyed it

Enjoyed this, hope there are more chapters, could be a good series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Real Good Effort

SHABASH! Nice storyline; keep it up. Complete the story; waiting eagerly for subsequent chapters. Consider getting it edited.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
b239

nice please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
dafuq did i just read

pretty authentic. pics?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

erotic, get on with the next part of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story, Pakistani author!

I was impressed by the initial challenging style of your two women contestants. I especially appreciate stories from the other side of the world, now that we exist in a nuclear age and I pray we can all become brothers before it becomes too late. I enjoy learning how others think...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
submission

would love to hear of a submission wrestling match... to see who is stronger and more determined.

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