All Comments on 'Wife vs Maid'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
submission

would love to hear of a submission wrestling match... to see who is stronger and more determined.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story, Pakistani author!

I was impressed by the initial challenging style of your two women contestants. I especially appreciate stories from the other side of the world, now that we exist in a nuclear age and I pray we can all become brothers before it becomes too late. I enjoy learning how others think...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

erotic, get on with the next part of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
dafuq did i just read

pretty authentic. pics?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
b239

nice please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Real Good Effort

SHABASH! Nice storyline; keep it up. Complete the story; waiting eagerly for subsequent chapters. Consider getting it edited.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyed it

Enjoyed this, hope there are more chapters, could be a good series.

trogtedtrogtedover 15 years ago
Good story.

Looking forward to seeing subsequent chapters.

You might consider having an editor. Despite writing in a foreign language you did very well.

Liberated

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantasy I'll share

Good Story..

Albeit maybe not in good taste to say this but your slain leader Mrs. Bhuto who was killed was a desirable woman who I really would have liked to undress, suck on her breasts and pussy for about two or three hours before I made love to and fucked all night. Just a fantasy of mine I thought I'd share with you. A beautiful MILF. Shame some son of a bitch had to end her life.

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