All Comments on 'Will and Chloe Pt. 02'

Story is getting good, great job.

He finally started to get some balls at the end!

4

FTDS

Thanks.

I think I like where this is going

I LoVe It 💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘

Love their back and forth, makes them feel much more like a real relationship. The action is also phenomenal.

This is awesome!

Nice story. I liked the first chapter better. The pace slowed way down here and I found all the discussions of specific video games and movies distracting and difficult to get through. Chloe also seemed much less confident here but I suppose maybe she was just faking confidence in the first chapter (since she had a panic attack in her car afterwards).