by BrazenHorse
This is a well written and fun story of two people enjoying and exploring sexual adventures. Great details and is so entertaining with their thoughts and comments. Great. Thanks for your efforts to write and publish. Looking forward to lots more of these two. Cheers
My thoughts are best described by your final words of this chapter - He couldn't wait to see what would come next (hopefully some cum play between these two?). I really am enjoying the slow build up and erotic imagery. You have a talent!
What a charming story you have here! I'm eager to continue! I care about the characters, and that is rare in online erotica! Well done ... you are a talented writer!
p.s. ~ I LOVE your term: "post-nut clarity" .... can I relate or what! lol