All Comments on 'William the Hypnotist Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The dialogue got VERY stilted at the end, like a robot reading lines of a script. Also, the lack of explanation as to how he managed to enslave them to this degree after only two trances on a stage with peopple watching kinda takes me out of it...

ejsathomeejsathome9 months ago

Cold and unemotional. Not very interesting, nor erotic.

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