All Comments on 'Window Shopping'

Hey there, great writing. Really nicely crafted. I enjoyed your explanation of how she felt during the experience. Made me think I was there. Really intimate.

If I was part of that crowd outside watching, I wouldn't have been power fisting in the air. I'd have been fisting my hard rod which no doubt would have been pulled out of my pants, just like it is now. I'm sure I would have shot my load when she squirted on the window. Great visual descriptions. I enjoyed this short story so much I read your other submissions. Loved them. Looking forward to more.

Loved the story...made me want to live it! window exposure is so very erotic!